Lullaby-help welcomed

[jazznjesus]

Hello,
This is my attempt at writing a children's lullaby. I'd appreciate any feedback.
Thanks,
Jill

https://soundcloud.com/jill-deweese/swe ... er_1master

[burpo]

HI there, Jill.

First off, good job so far.

I think the minor key is a little off for this listing. A catchy hummable repeated motif seems
to be what they're after. Just my opinion, of course.

Also, your MIDI voices sound a bit stark and dry. I'd look at some softer sounds and
wet them up with a little reverb.

You still have plenty of time, so keep at it!

-b