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The Never Ending Re-Write
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Razor7Music
Impressive
Joined: Wed May 19, 2010 2:05 pm Posts: 203 Location: Irvine, CA
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After being at songwriting for many years, I recently decided to get serious again - get current and marketable with my tunes. I had a couple tunes I was already working on when I bought Robin Frederick's hit songwriting shortcuts book. As I'm reading her book, now after about every 5 or so shortcuts, I decide to re-write my song! I typically do several lyric re-writes as a general rule. Sometimes what reads well doesn't sing well, etc. This time, I'm thinking I would rather re-write the tunes now, rather than go back after I've spent the time mixing and mastering them only to re-write them anyway. I think it's kind of funny because in one sense, I want to get the tunes out and build my catalog, but on the other hand, I'd rather have fewer really good songs than be prolific with songs that would be good only if... Bottom line is that with each re-write, the tunes are actually improving and I think that's what really matters. I'm aware, and guilty of the "fussing" stage of writing/producing and I fight that--but in reality, with each re-write I think the songs are actually getting better and better. I think once I've finished the book, the next song I write will come a lot easier because I will start them off with a working knowledge of what sounds good and works in today's market, rather than having to retool something that didn't. Thanks for letting me share. 
_________________Thanks, Stephen Davis, Songwriter http://www.taxi.com/razor7musichttps://soundcloud.com/stephen-davis-27Taxi Member Since November 2012 “If everyone likes you, you're doing something wrong” --Jenna McMahon
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| Thu Jan 17, 2013 9:30 am |
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JeSsiCaRaTz
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Joined: Tue Dec 04, 2012 11:21 am Posts: 14
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Thanks for sharing! Makes me think I should read that book. One of my problems is after I write my "final" version, sometimes I fall in love with it. Then it's hard to change it! What I do is I force myself to revise any parts that I think are not totally strong, of course keeping both versions. I tell myself that I can decide later which version I like better, nothing to lose. I almost always end up liking the newer version better! It's a weird process. It's like having a baby that's just a little bit ugly. You love the baby so much that you wouldn't change it for the world, and yet...sure, it would be great if your baby were better looking.
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| Thu Jan 17, 2013 10:22 am |
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Razor7Music
Impressive
Joined: Wed May 19, 2010 2:05 pm Posts: 203 Location: Irvine, CA
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JeSsiCaRaTz wrote: Thanks for sharing! Makes me think I should read that book. One of my problems is after I write my "final" version, sometimes I fall in love with it. Then it's hard to change it! What I do is I force myself to revise any parts that I think are not totally strong, of course keeping both versions. I tell myself that I can decide later which version I like better, nothing to lose. I almost always end up liking the newer version better! It's a weird process. It's like having a baby that's just a little bit ugly. You love the baby so much that you wouldn't change it for the world, and yet...sure, it would be great if your baby were better looking. I recommend the book. You may not need or use 100% of it, but it is definitly worth it. BTW--I thought mothers always thought their babaies were cute!
_________________Thanks, Stephen Davis, Songwriter http://www.taxi.com/razor7musichttps://soundcloud.com/stephen-davis-27Taxi Member Since November 2012 “If everyone likes you, you're doing something wrong” --Jenna McMahon
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| Thu Jan 17, 2013 12:25 pm |
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AnthonyCeseri
Getting Busy
Joined: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:54 am Posts: 87
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Razor7Music wrote: After being at songwriting for many years, I recently decided to get serious again - get current and marketable with my tunes. I had a couple tunes I was already working on when I bought Robin Frederick's hit songwriting shortcuts book. As I'm reading her book, now after about every 5 or so shortcuts, I decide to re-write my song! I typically do several lyric re-writes as a general rule. Sometimes what reads well doesn't sing well, etc. This time, I'm thinking I would rather re-write the tunes now, rather than go back after I've spent the time mixing and mastering them only to re-write them anyway. I think it's kind of funny because in one sense, I want to get the tunes out and build my catalog, but on the other hand, I'd rather have fewer really good songs than be prolific with songs that would be good only if... Bottom line is that with each re-write, the tunes are actually improving and I think that's what really matters. I'm aware, and guilty of the "fussing" stage of writing/producing and I fight that--but in reality, with each re-write I think the songs are actually getting better and better. I think once I've finished the book, the next song I write will come a lot easier because I will start them off with a working knowledge of what sounds good and works in today's market, rather than having to retool something that didn't. Thanks for letting me share.  That's an awesome attitude. I think you're so right about how the rewrites you're doing now will help make your later songs come easier. Great stuff. Thanks for posting 
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| Sat Feb 23, 2013 12:43 pm |
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Razor7Music
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Joined: Wed May 19, 2010 2:05 pm Posts: 203 Location: Irvine, CA
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"That's an awesome attitude. I think you're so right about how the rewrites you're doing now will help make your later songs come easier. Great stuff. Thanks for posting "Hey thanks. Us songwriters need outside encouragement as much as we can get it!
_________________Thanks, Stephen Davis, Songwriter http://www.taxi.com/razor7musichttps://soundcloud.com/stephen-davis-27Taxi Member Since November 2012 “If everyone likes you, you're doing something wrong” --Jenna McMahon
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| Sat Feb 23, 2013 5:18 pm |
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Russell Landwehr
Committed Musician
Joined: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:59 pm Posts: 564 Location: Midwestern Ohio
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Hi Stephen.
I like your perspective on this.
I'm in the "Quality over Quantity" camp myself. And I've heard that if you focus on Quality, the Quantity will follow.
Thanks for your post.
Regards, Russell
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| Sat Feb 23, 2013 6:00 pm |
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andygabrys
Serious Musician
Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:09 pm Posts: 1554 Location: Santa Fe, NM by way of Chilliwack, Boston, NYC
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good thread.
a guitar teacher of mine impressed on me the difference between depth (skill) and breadth (repertoire) - this was concerning playing jazz.
focussing on breadth first means you can play lots of songs, but non of them at a very deep level.
but focussing on depth means that you become incredibly skillful at playing one song. Its easier to apply that to other songs later.
I see a lot of parallels between that and writing / production. The depth is acquiring those deep objective hearing / listening / editing skills which I think everything is then built off of. If you don't hear it / realize it, its hard to do anything about it (or even know where to start).
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| Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:11 pm |
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AnthonyCeseri
Getting Busy
Joined: Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:54 am Posts: 87
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Razor7Music wrote: Hey thanks. Us songwriters need outside encouragement as much as we can get it!
Definitely! 
_________________ See your favorite hit songs analyzed, so you can use their techniques in your own music: http://successforyoursongs.com/freeoffer/songwriting/
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