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Sunday Too Late

Post by smam60 » Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:49 pm

Sunday Too Late

They're trying to change the constitution
Is that a right thing for us to do
Those pious people from the churches
Want us to teach religion in school
Have our kids become more violent
Has the world become less cruel
Has evolution given us a subsitute
Thats better than the old golden rule
Churches are for teaching morals
Public schools tell kids to wait
but for how many children
Does Sunday come too late

Dictators oppress the people
We call that tyrant rule
Aren't They’re usually the ones
Who don’t allow religion in school
Churches are for teaching morals
Public schools tell kids to wait
But for how many children
Does Sunday come too late

Keeping religion out of school
It's not a likely thing to do
As every believer knows
Silent prayers are heard too
Churches are for teaching morals
Public schools tell kids to wait
But for how many children
Does Sunday come too late

When Problems do arise
Some kids can't wait
The guidance they don't get
Is what may seal their fate
Last edited by smam60 on Mon May 05, 2014 5:51 pm, edited 5 times in total.

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Re: Sunday Too Late

Post by nylyrics » Wed Feb 12, 2014 10:44 am

Hi

I've read through some of your lyric postings here. I find you have good ability to focus -stay on point - say something and surprise too.

I dont know what you're needing in terms of critique or specifics of your reason for posting. I would say if you zoned in on a listing you like you would seem to be able to write some pretty strong lyrics for them.

Good luck.

Andy

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Re: Sunday Too Late

Post by smam60 » Mon May 05, 2014 5:40 pm

Hi and thanks for the kind words. By your different points of reference I can tell you have a nice understanding of the different facets and aspects of lyrics . Thanks Andy

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