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Enterprise Cg

Post by smam60 » Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:01 pm

Enterprise CG

All the friendly people
Must be visiting another locality
There aint none of em left
Here in Enterprise CG
They got a saying
And you can prove it by me
Anyone who’s not home grown
Is soon gone from Enterprise CG
They're headed in the wrong direction
Their water tower says it best
This town aint up and comming
They mispelled the word progress



Take down your welcome sign
You don’t want no company
The only strangers you like
Are those leaving Enterprise Cg
They got a saying
And you can prove it by me
Anyone who’s not home grown
Is soon gone from enterprise Cg
They're headed in the wrong direction
Their water tower says it best
This town aint up and comming
They mispelled the word progress



No tearful goodbys
No open arms missing me
Nothing but heartaches
Left behind in enterprise CG
They got a saying
And you can prove it by me
Anyone who’s not home grown
Is soon gone from Enterprise Cg
They're headed in the wrong direction
Their water tower says it best
This town aint up and comming
They mispelled the word progress
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Re: Enterprise Cg

Post by mikeShort » Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:04 pm

Call me old or out of touch, but I don't know what Enterprise CG means, specifically the CG. Without that insight, I don't have much to offer.
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Re: Enterprise Cg

Post by smam60 » Mon May 05, 2014 6:01 pm

Hi mike. thanks for the critiquing. I can see with your experience that you have a lot of good points to offer. I'm grateful for your advice. Thanks Andy

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