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Time Machine

Post by veedriver22 » Mon Apr 14, 2014 2:09 pm

*Lead in

Losing my grip. My reality distored now. Can't escape this notion some fool cheated
time, Changed the past.
And now my world is broken, all gone away, out of control so fast.

*Small Bridge (bridge 1)

How did they do this? It would take a craft fine tuned. I need to find this machine. .



*Chorus (cycle 4 times down, 4th time different) + carry down to next segment).

#1 Where is this contraption? What does it looks like. Do you know has it been seen?

#2 You know its there, when needed, always timely, (when) on the big screen.

#3 ( Not here not now, no not in this place. Reality is so uncompromising.)

#4 But the picture show, well, they go back, turn it right, ........ not surprising.



*Main lead in bridge (bridge 2).



*Main part 1 cycvle *2

#1 I find myself thinking it’s what should happen

#2 but time it keeps passing. Its going to run out.

*Main part 2 cycle *3



#1 (wait for bottom of cycle) if I could just get on board this veiled wonder, this machine.

#2 Dial the destination, at bending speed, pin-point precision.

#3 (wait for bottom of cycle) An extraordinary journey, target: same place, different scene.



*Main part 3 cycle *3

#1 (wait.........) I wonder, would I see, the years wind back?

#2 The effects, near impossible to track.

#3 Watch out for the Paradox, could be a deadly last act.



*Main exit bridge (bridge 3). No words.



*Step down bridge (bridge 4). No words – could use voice effects here



*Resonance Solo -1st fret - no words



*Small Bridge (bridge 1 repeat)

How did they do this? It would take a craft so fine tuned. I need to find this machine.



Chorus - Repeat (cycle 4 times down,4th time different) + carry down to next segment).

#1 Where is this contraption? What does it looks like? Do you know has it been seen?

#2 You know it’s there, when needed, always timely, (when) on the big screen.

#3 Not here, not now, no not in this place. Reality so uncompromising.

#4 But the picture show, well, they go back, turn it right, ....... not surprising.



*Exit solo

If only I had it, as they do on the reel, I could go back and set things right.

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Re: Time Machine

Post by Casey H » Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:19 pm

veedriver22

The format you presented your lyrics with here is too confusing, at least for my feeble brain. ;)

Can you present them in a more standard format, such as:

Verse 1
xxx
xxx
xxx

Pre-Chorus 1
xxx
xxx

Chorus 1
xxx
xxx
xxx

Verse 2
xxx
xxx
xxx

Pre-Chorus 2
xxx
xxx

Chorus 2
xxx
xxx
xxx

Bridge
xxx
xxx
xxx

and so on? I have no idea what these cycles are you are talking about.

Best,
Casey

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