Both My Feet Have Been Blown Clear Off!

[Len911]

I'm not sure "having a chorus that stands out more from the verses" is the same thing as "chorus not strong enough".
The chorus could be strong enough and still not stand out from the verses.

I used the words "strong enough" in the general sense of how effective a chorus is for commercial success. Standing out from the verse (e.g. sectional contrast) is in that general category.

But this is all irrelevant without hearing the song and reading the listing.

Casey

Casey, to be fair I shouldn't have commented at all because it's in the taxi review station, oops! I apologize.

[Passionaterocks2]

Well been back it, as usual and I have post on shout outs thanks to Screeners.
I am very aware this is a learning curve for us all. To meet the industry's standards.

One would need to vent. I used the subject Both feet blown clear off in reference to Michaels comment Don't Shoot yourself in the foot!
As I can see some here , took some shots also at me!

My Bio is public if you would like to read both of them.
I can't say I am a capitalist! As one indicated their father was or is!

But through out my life I can say, I have seen people like to be a opportunist infection upon the weak!
You may have to look that one up medically!

Thanks to everyone who posted, and your inputs. Good ,Bad or Ugly!
And yes, you better believe I have grit, and I am thankful for it!
Yes music has passion and hard times build character and manifests humility and strength.
Meek doesn't mean you are weak!

You can always see the ones who lack it, miles away.

Once again, thanks for everyone big welcome.

[Passionaterocks2]

Hope I have my Link in here, just worked it.
The 2 songs were removed , I was ranting about!
Have some songs up, had almost 50 in there.
Will be uploading in future.
Now back at writing, best to all here

[niallyboy]

I must side with Len911 and his comments, especially regarding Janis Joplin's passion vs. screaming: it can surely be one and the same.

Welcome to the reality check,

[Passionaterocks2]

Thanks Neil
I guess!

LOL She was not in my era of music.
Good point!
Everyone suffers when you get returns, after 38 returns! Thanking every screener on shout out
forum for the Gems of advice.
But I was making light about having both feet blown off, Don't shoot yourself in the foot! Right!
Well I got a double barrel that day and dang gone it hurt!

[Passionaterocks2]

www.taxi.com/passionaterocks
I have my site public.

Not sure about email here. I have not friend ! LOL!
I will go to general and post soon!
Back to studio ,submit and forget!

[Casey H]

Hi Jacalyn

I hope you didn't interpret any of my posts as mean spirited in any way. Not meant that way at all.

I do wish instead of removing those 2 songs from your Taxi profile, you would have left them up and allowed us to discuss them in view of the specific listings (which you would have needed to post as well).

All we have now is a complaint that the screeners didn't forward your songs but nothing to go by.

Anyway, wish you the best!

Casey

[Passionaterocks2]

No Casey not offended, you and everyone helped me.
Those two songs I would share by email only.
I really appreciate responses and advice, I am all dusted off and found my feet ! And the toenail polish was intact!

Looking forward to you all.

In everyway this is a tough industry.

I was aware years ago!

Good things to come to those who improve and reach the limits they need to be at.
I get by with a little help from my friends.
Thanks everyone once Again