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"Christmas Wrap" - seeks a rapper & production collab

Post by funsongs » Sat Nov 22, 2014 12:09 pm

Moved here from another board:
penned these lyrics a few days ago, intending to find a rapper who could add the music... like around a 90bpm clip...
a tempo sumpthin like this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ZiPnuAbUQg

Christmas Wrap
Intro)
Yo… yo… yo… what it is… what it is?!
Are y’all ready for Christmas?!... ‘cause it be the schizz!!
Verse 1)
People ev‘rywhere... scurryin’ about
Ya betah not cry… ya betah not pout
Ya see… Santa’s gettin’ down… all dressed in red
At least that what be what my Mama said
Pre-chorus)
So wuchya gonna wrap up to get ready fo’ dat?
Well here’s what I do… first drop of my hat
Chorus)
Insteada all that commercial crap
I’ll give y’all a little Christmas Wrap
I’ll tie this whole thing up with a string and a rhyme…
It’s about this thing… and a once upon-a-time
This is about One King… sent down as a child
Humble… and lowly… meek… and mild
Gave up all His riches and glory
To rescue some butts… well… that’s my story
Verse 2)
Folks go shop… until they drop dead
Gettin’ malled all to pieces… spendin’ alla they bread
But that aint what it’s supposta be for
Emptyin’ the shelves of big ol’ box stores
Repeat Pre-chorus & Chorus
Bridge)
So now that you know what’s really goin’ on
Why donchya join me… singin’ this as a song…
"Set aside a time to pay Him respect that is due
And pass around some love and joy to others, too!"
Repeat Chorus
Outro
© 11-19-2014 funsongs, uh-huh

any takers...? :? :shock:
Cheers... Happy Thanksgiving and Merry Christmas...all;
Peter
(or... again: maybe I oughta just stick to the Country stuff...) :roll:
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Post by feaker66 » Sun Nov 23, 2014 8:12 am

Peter

If I were home, I would give this a shot.

Sincerely

Paul
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