My Vacant Heart

[GabyMartinez]

I
I’m looking for the right one
To sign on a lasting lease
I’ve given up on passing thrills
No more one nighters please
I want someone who’ll stay and fill
My vacant heart

II
Though it’s hard looking back
At false starts from so called friends
When tenderness got burdensome
I wound up in dead ends
It’s love that soothes the aching from
My vacant heart

Bridge
What questions can I ask
To break off from my past
Is there a truth I must obey
To help me change my ways

III
I’d give away this special key
To the one who’d keep it safe
It opens up the inner door
To my hope, love and faith
Then I'd take down this sign for
My vacant heart

[Quintus]

Newbie here, personally I think these are very good lyrics!

[nylyrics]

Hey nice lyrics. I think you are heading perfectly into a B or Bridge Section right after that second verse.

Maybe talk about what that Love is like - a love that.....
Switch things up a little there and return to your final verse.

Good luck with this.

Andy

[shanereaction]

I definitely enjoyed these lyrics. A stellar job!