Funky Tune Needs more HOOKS!!!!!

garywhite · Post by **garywhite** » Mon Mar 16, 2015 1:28 pm

Hey everyone. Please check out https://soundcloud.com/musicsynctank/zi ... ughmix2015

This is a 'work in progress'. I wanted to submit it in time for the computer game listing on Sunday, but I didn't think it was ready or finished yet. There are 3 writers already on this, but if anyone wants in on the publishing for a 4-way split and has an AMAZING top line to add, cool. Listen to the section from 1.28. It's an empty verse which needs RAP/Vocal. If you have any ideas for any other sections, also cool. Critiques welcomed. I know it's a bit bonkers and dis-jointed, but that's the point, really... Cheers. Gary

funsongs · Post by **funsongs** » Mon Mar 16, 2015 1:36 pm

likin' the vibe, Gary.

lots of room for some counterpoint/funky hooks... guitar & horns.
sorry I don't have capture gear & the means to experiment with some guitar bits.
Nice work! Good luck.
Cheers,
Peter R.
https://soundcloud.com/funsongs-1/theresgonnabedancin

TheElement · Post by **TheElement** » Wed Mar 18, 2015 6:54 pm

Hi Gary. cool track. I'm hearing a horn section in that part.

Welcome to Taxi.

garywhite · Post by **garywhite** » Mon Apr 06, 2015 1:52 pm

Thanks for the replies. I've been kicking this track around for years - can't ever seem to turn the corner with it..

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