New Song " Feels Like I'm Falling "

[songmaster]

Hi Everyone

I just wrote a new song " Feels Like I'm Falling ". It was produced by Scott Free and sung by Juliet Lyons. I am really happy how the song turned out. I just need some advice about what kind of artist this sounds like and what genre it would fit into.

Any advice would be appreciated. The song is on my Taxi page. Thanks all in advance!

Feels Like I'm Falling

Feels like I'm falling, I'm only made of flesh and blood
Feels like I'm falling, you bring me down then tear me up
Feels like I'm falling, it's like I'll never be enough
Oh, how can I be strong, falling for your love

I can take your thoughtless words
And give you back a smile
I can camouflage the hurt
And go the extra mile
I can hide the pain inside
And never let it show
But oh, I don't think you know
When you're so cold

Chorus

Nothings ever black or white
We lived in shades of grey
All the good things in our lives
They all got swept away
I can take whatever fate
This crazy world might hold
But oh, I have to let you go
When I'm so cold

Chorus

Bridge

Oh, you tore my heart from me
You stood and watched me bleed
With all you put me through
Now I know, this love's not worth it all
I might die from the fall
So I'll stop loving you.

Chorus...end.

[johnlewitt]

Hey Tom,

Nice song.

In my mind, I can see this working in a montage scene in TV or Film.

I'm scratching my head as to an a la and I can't come up with one. Contemporary Singer/Songwriter? Adult Contemporary? Those are probably the closest two genres.

Good luck with it.

John

[nylyrics]

Yes, nice song. Excellent production and great emotion in the vocal lyrics and melody. I agree the hook works well for film/tv scenes I would take an attempt at looking for listings where "adult contemporary" and "heartfelt or emotional" terms are used and compare to the alas they give.

Best of luck with this song!!

Andy

[larrymagee]

Great song. Congrats.

[songmaster]

Thanks John Andy and Larry

John, I like the montage idea and I guess it does have a contemporary Adult vibe going on.

Andy, I agree with you Scott and Juliet did an amazing job with this song and I will aim this one for A/C and emotional type projects.

Larry, thank you for having a listen , I appreciate it

Cheers

Tom

[ScottFree4All]

Hey Tom,

I just wanted to say that both Juliet and I were proud to be part of the song. You wrote a good one here, we just took the baton from you.

Cheers,
Scott

[songmaster]

Hey Scott and Juliet

Thanks for taking my song " Feels like I'm Falling " and becoming the " Wind Beneath My Wings " ..Oh , that's so corny but true! Can't wait to work with you again!

Cheers

Tom

[feaker66]

Nice song. I say film also. I tell you one thing, I will never get tired of that voice. Holy cow, in those quiet intimate parts

Only thing slightly lacking would be a little lift in the chorus to break it up a bit.

Very cool

Sincerely

Paul

[songmaster]

Hey Paul

Yes, I thought Juliet did a great job at capturing the emotional feel of this song. As far as the chorus is concerned, I love a big chorus, but I was trying to make it so that the song could be used in film and tv and not stand out too much.

Now it's on to the next song

Cheers

Tom