Out of Orbit

[TheFates]

Hey guys,

Hope you're well. Below are the lyrics to my song "Out of Orbit". You can to the scratch demo here (excuse my vocals!): https://soundcloud.com/the-fates/out-of-orbit/s-6VrTZ

Would love your thoughts on melody and narrative.

Look forward to hearing your thoughts!

Elizabeth

OUT OF ORBIT
Swore it on this life and next
I’d never settle for less
Spent some nights craving more
Someone worth falling for

You weren’t in my plans, truth told
Love dealt a winning hand, won’t fold
Earth no longer has my heart on hold
Tell me, when do we start? I’m sold, I’m sold

My limbs go weak
Lift off, can’t speak
Gravity, so out of reach because

I got knocked out of orbit
Still haven’t absorbed it
The choice was all mine
I said, you knocked me out of orbit
Still haven’t absorbed it (It's so crazy)
and I’m doing fine (You're my baby)

Tour the cosmos with you
All the constellations for two
Has d-dizzied up this girl, for sure
This feeling? May there be no cure (no, no, no)

Fun, ambitious, kind, at ease (oh, oh, oh)
Sexy when he speaks his mind and these (oh, oh, oh)
Are the traits that pull my heart strings (oh, oh)
And the reason why I don’t mind floating

My limbs go weak (Ready)
Lift off, can’t speak (It's heady)
I'm ready
I know I want you, I won't stop until I am yours

(repeat chorus)

Up into the clouds
Just past the stars
Beyond the planets
that’s where we are

Up into the clouds
Just past the stars
I just want to be
Where you are

Lift off, can’t speak (I'm just)
So out of reach because

(repeat chorus)

[TheFates]

@yurporada: Whoops! Here you go! https://soundcloud.com/the-fates/out-of-orbit/s-cJGPH