Zombie Sunday

[Nettles]

Hi!
I´m new to the forum so I tought I just send a lyric to a song I´m working on - Zombie Sunday - and see how it works.

Started out by trowing words with a songwriting friend ... Woke up dead this morning ....looks like another zombie sunday ...
and so we wrote the first verse. Then it did not get any further until a couple of days ago when I started writing again and came up with an idea what it was all about and finished it up.

I know I sometimes write in a way so the meaning or story is unclear. There are two layers in this and I wonder if you see them? Or does it need more explaining?
An also are there words or lines that do not work?

Zombie Sunday

V1
Woke up dead this morning
Color comics on the porch
Looks like another zombie Sunday
Better hide the torch

V2
Stayed out with this lady
She had brains and I had fun
Wish I could sleep til it gets Monday
But she’s got me on the run

CHORUS
Zombie Sunday – I whish I had a living soul
Zombie Sunday – Everything is getting cold
Zombie Sunday – I need someone to meet my knife
Zombie Sunday - What a way to live a life

v3
At the Zombie crossroads
There’s no sign that you will see
But if you meet a hollow stranger
There’s a chance that it be me

V4
I’m undead unliving
I was buried and dug up
Someone is making my decisions
And she will never stop

Chorus

Bridge
I was poisoned by smalltalk at my back
I’m dead walking and never I’ll be coming back

V1 reprise
Woke up dead this morning
Color comics on the porch
Looks like another zombie Sunday
Better hide the torch


Chorus