Hi I'm new to the forums. I wrote these lyrics about the time me and my wife just met. Any critique would be most appreciated. Many thanks.
Young Hearts
V1
The day we first met I will always remember
You came into my life in the month of September
Your smiling face, your warm embrace
There’s no one else in the world who can take your place
V2
We fell in love on a warm summer night
Down by the sea under a pale moonlight
The stars shone brightly from above
That’s the night when I found my one true love
CHORUS:
Lying here all alone thinking of you
Long blond hair and pretty eyes of blue
Two hearts that beat as one
From two different worlds now under the sun
We have a love that will last for years to come
BRIDGE:
You went away, but you couldn’t stay
Across the sea so far away
Those lonely days and nights so long
Back into my arms where you belong
V3
We’ve been together for so many years
Lots of happiness and lots of tears
As we look back and reminisce of our past
We knew then we had found true love at last
CHORUS:
Lying here all alone thinking of you
Long blond hair and pretty eyes of blue
Two hearts that beat as one
From two different worlds now under the sun
We have a love that will last for years to come
END
Young Hearts
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