Bourbon Whisky Valentine

[TheFates]

Hi everyone,

Hope you're enjoying your day or night. Would like to get your thoughts on the below lyrics and narrative for my song "Bourbon Whisky Valentine". You can listen to the demo here (excuse my singing!): https://soundcloud.com/the-fates/bourbo ... ne/s-D13GB.

Thanks in advance!

Elizabeth

VERSE 1 (to be sung by male ensemble)
All work, no play, is no, is no
Is no fun
We all want to be loved, be loved, be loved
Be loved by someone

VERSE 2 (to be sung by female vocalist)
Happiness is never promised
That’s part of the game
Need someone to strip my armors
I thought of your name

CHORUS
Drunk off that wine
Get on the line, dial my
Bourbon whisky valentine
I’ve eaten my fill
For other thrills, dial my
Bourbon whisky valentine
Abandon all care
I just want you here
Bourbon whisky valentine
Make me your mine
If only for tonight
Bourbon whisky valentine
It's carefree by design

VERSE 3 (to be sung by male ensemble)
All work, no play, is no, is no
Is no fun
We all want to be loved, be loved, be loved
Be loved by someone

VERSE 4 (to be sung by female vocalist)
Double my shot, thanks bartender
I’ve waited all day
Make this a night to remember
Just need your embrace, take me away

(repeat chorus)