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I need more ears

Post by ronnie35 » Wed Jul 01, 2015 9:01 pm

Hello I made some changes to a song I put on the forum yesterday the name has changed it is now called ATOMIC DANCING its my attempt again at edm dance /house Could I please get some more info its due tonight WEST COAST TIME 11:59

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Post by funsongs » Wed Jul 01, 2015 9:22 pm

ronnie35 wrote:Hello I made some changes to a song I put on the forum yesterday the name has changed it is now called ATOMIC DANCING its my attempt again at edm dance /house Could I please get some more info its due tonight WEST COAST TIME 11:59

THANKS ,RON http://www.soundcloud.com/777rd
Sorry, Ron... only 2 ears allowed per customer. :? 8-)

Seriously, though: EDM's not my thing, so I can't comment on its fitting or mix; but one thing that is has going strongly for it, imho
(and listening to ML's TAXI TV about the importance of the title)
you have a great title, and the music fits it.
That alone could get you high-marks, me thinks.
Good luck, Amigo.
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Post by lesmac » Wed Jul 01, 2015 11:26 pm

Hey Ron, you've been busy.
I think the low end needs attention. It seems a bit deep and cluttered like its all deep kick and low sine till the gritty bass synth comes in at about 1.00.
Incidentally thats where a filter sweep/rise might sound nice.
You need the guys with the mixing ears and the EDM credits to chime in.
I think your'e going great guns tho :)
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Re: I need more ears

Post by mikeymike2000 » Wed Jul 01, 2015 11:38 pm

Hi Ronnie,

Not my specialty either but your under the gun so I figure I would try to help out.

Overall I think it is great. But like the previous comment, I agree that the thumping bass drum could use a little more gusto. Aside from that it seems to fit the bill.

Nice work, good luck!
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Re: I need more ears

Post by ronnie35 » Thu Jul 02, 2015 2:18 pm

Thanks Guys
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