I really love the hook/title, and I'd be sad to see that part changed.
Totally agree re the 'hanging' word/line, but I think for me it's just the word 'hanging' I am not 100% happy with.
Chorus hook line idea
Quote: "I think of you and I lose control
I struggle to breathe as the air gets thinner
Your name leaves my lips, and slowly dies
From a scream to a whisper"
I too would love to hear it to music
Does this title/hook line work?
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Re: Does this title/hook line work?
Hi Amanda!
I ended up going with "It's Only A Whisper"... It's all on another thread (bad singing et al!)... http://forums.taxi.com/topic133369.html
Thanks!!
Casey
I ended up going with "It's Only A Whisper"... It's all on another thread (bad singing et al!)... http://forums.taxi.com/topic133369.html
Thanks!!
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