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does these lyrics work?

Post by melodymessiah » Sat Jan 09, 2016 11:34 am

hi. just wonder what you guys think of these lyrics, for an a/c ballad. i know some may want some backround info/details on what happened, WHY it went so bad, but when i checked out "skyscraper" by demi lovato, i didn't find any of this info...


firefighter


(v01)
black smoke
get ready to choke
if you try to rescue me now
your lungs will explode
it's no false alarm

coal case
a frozen blaze
you put fire in my heart
then flushed it away
still the embers glow
but my heart's gone cold

(ch)
so hey
you'll never be my firefighter
can't put me out with flaming water
when i'm burning when i'm burning so bad
no way you'll ever be my firefighter
you can't come back and save my shelter
you're just burning /hurting
you're just burning yourself

(v02)
your hose
is spraying me down
you think using highest pressure
will ignite me again
but i will not drown

no i won't play with fire
think your outfit's getting worn
and your skills' expired
i won't fuel you up
for your final drop

ch

(bridge)
ashes and residue
still stuck on my shoes
i'll walk it away
with the smoke in my face
till the rain starts to shine

ch x2
Last edited by melodymessiah on Sun Feb 28, 2016 9:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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