"Nice writing, but this cue is a bit dramatic and suspenseful for sports writing. We need to stick with the 'triumphant, heroic' themes. Football players aren't actually really in mortal danger like this cue would lead us to believe. This would be a better match for more dramatic applications."
I'm just happy to see that my instrumentation and mix were not the issue... I totally get the point though.
https://soundcloud.com/paulcroteau/orch ... flate-this
AND, thanks to #396 for the Percussive Trailer forward. "Nice! Great focus on driving drums with the groove driving and building the music"
https://soundcloud.com/paulcroteau/time-for-change