New song " God Made The Moon "

[songmaster]

Hi

This is a new song I collaborated on with Tim Angsten. We would like your opinions, especially any ala's, lyrics etc. the usual. Thanks in advance. The song is on my Taxi page " God Made The Moon ". Below are the lyrics

God Made The Moon

You look so, beautiful, I'm a lucky man
We both know, where this goes girl
You've always been the one
This night was made for us
I want to spend my life with you.

God made the moon, for nights like this
He made the stars so we can wish
Gave us hope, we can hold our whole lives through
He made our hearts, so we can see
He gave us dreams so we believe
So the dark will never fall on me and you
God made the moon

I know we, just might be, taking such a chance
But I want to, be with you, now
We'll face what ever comes
Our faith is from above
Shinning like all my love for you

Chorus

Bridge


He made your lips, your dreamy eyes
He wove your hair with soft moonlight
He gave you breath and beauty too
Then in God's grace, He gave me you

Chorus...end

[marcblack30]

Hey Tom, this is a great song! I'm just listening on my laptop speakers and I'm blown away!

Lovin' Tim's voice, sounds very modern and current. I'm not super up to date on the country scene, but this reminds me of Tim McGraw.


Great job to you both, and best of luck!

Marc

[burpo]

Super-tight!

Great job! This'll find a home, for certain.

Congrats and bravo, gents.

-b

[bobporri]

Yeah, great voice and song. I'm not the best judge of "current sounding", but it seems that way to me.

Great work guys.

Bob P.

[songmaster]

Hey Marc , long time no hear thank you for your comments . I'm glad to hear that it sounds good on your laptop. I know it sounds great in my headphones, so that is a plus! Yeah, when I first heard Tim Angsten's voice , I though of Tim Mcgraw also. That is a confirmation of who I should shop it to.

Thank you also Burpo and Bob for having a listen. I too hope it will find a home and that it is current sounding. You never know these days what passes for current , being they are adding rap lyrics into country songs

Tom

[SteveBaruah]

Super-slick production! I really enjoyed listening to that.

[songmaster]

Thanks Steve. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Tim not only sang the song but produced it as well. He is a very talented guy.

Cheers

Tom

[LyricsMatter]

Tom’s words + Tim’s vocal = another wonderful collaborative effort.

The lyrics, melody, vocal and production are beautifully done.

You never know these days what passes for current , being they are adding rap lyrics into country songs

Tom

I think this is a really good, radio worthy song - a more current-sounding song than your previously posted collaboration I Let Go.

All the best!

[songmaster]

Hey Lyrics Matter

Thank you for your observation between the two songs, " I Let Go " and this one. I am hoping that this one is " radio worthy " as you said. This song came to me as I went for a drive. I think I will go for more drives

Thanks again

Tom

[johnlewitt]

Tom,

Solid song and production.

I think it sounds like a contemporary cut, but from a slightly older artist (30+) if that makes sense!

John