Need Ears-Electronic-Based Dance Pop Instrumental

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Hello,

I would appreciate any feedback on the below for the below listing. Should I submit this track for this listing? Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/bill-kafka/the-n ... -2/s-GuHpI

NEW LISTING -- ELECTRONIC-Based DANCE POP INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed for a $2,000, Non-Exclusive, Direct-to-Music Supervisor Placement for an Online Ad for a popular Beauty Brand. They’re looking for runway-style Mid-to-Up-Tempo Cues that generally match the vibe, intensity, and style of these references:

“I Remember” by Deadmau5 & Kaskade:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUzVCw8BEXA

“How Deep Is Your Love” by Calvin Harris:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgqUJOudrcM

“Be Right There” by Diplo:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HIJ5XvZeb-k

Please submit Cues that have a swanky and sophisticated vibe, with a strut-worthy “four-on-the-floor” beat, cool Electro “ear candy,” and a theme that’s both melodically and rhythmically engaging. All submissions should be at least 2:00 minutes in length, with good edit points and Non-Faded endings. Do NOT copy or rip off the references in any way, shape, or form. Use them only as a general guide for tempo, tone, texture and overall vibe. Broadcast Quality is needed (great sounding home recordings are fine)