Magne

Hi, The lead in notes at 7 seconds wasn't bent enough" the dreaded "F" word. ha ha

Some other instrument is out of tune also badly at 23 and 24 seconds. Might be the bass? Wrong chord?

The song has a nice feel to it. Liked the accent guitar fills and sounds.

Great song to get up and close on the dance floor.

Like the singer also. Very sincere.

Tune that freekin bass ( and maybe others)

Keep at this, it has potential for sure.

paul

Yeah, I deserve some smoke for that, Paul! I spent three full hours writing and recording this, and my priority was to get'er done before supper, so it could generate some input over the weekend. Tuning was never a priority, but I guess I should have got it in better shape before posting. My bad Thanks for listening, anyway.