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mojobone
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 4:20 pm Posts: 8731 Location: deepest Indiana, where the tall corn grows
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 Your Best First lines
A great first line draws the listener in and can often set the scene or the tone for everything that follows. Post the best first line you ever wrote and the best first line you ever heard. I'm thinking we could get some great songs based on each others' first lines, as you can't copyright that by itself, anyway. If you use a first line from this thread, please post the song for our enjoyment and edification. Meanwhile, enjoy this R-rated article on the Top Fifty Opening Lines Of All Time; it's decidedly anglo-centric and dwells on depressing/outrageous songs but includes some really great ones, most especially in the comments. (R for NSFW language, including F-bombs, so don't click if easily offended, please) http://flavorwire.com/167657/50-of-the- ... ment-63298I think my favorite first line is Steve Goodman's. "It was all/ That I could do/ To keep from cryin'", from You Never Even Called Me By My Name, which is also a candidate for best title, btw. For economy, I've always liked the opener from Bon Jovi's Living On A Prayer, "Johnny used to work on the docks/ Union's been on strike, he's down on his luck, it's tough, so tough" What say you?
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Casey H
Joined: Tue Jan 27, 2004 3:22 pm Posts: 9020 Location: Philadelphia, PA
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 Re: Your Best First lines
Wow, I'm old... I only recognized 2-3 of them. Warren Zevon's "Chinese menu" line is definitely one of the all time best. I also love Zevon's: I went home with a waitress The way I always do How was I to know? She was with the Russians too Casey
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abtwilley
Joined: Thu Jul 15, 2010 6:37 pm Posts: 23
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Oh I used to be disgusted and now I try to be amused. But since their wings have got rusted, you know, the angels wanna wear my red shoes.
Elvis Costello
Also Dylan's "Positively 4th Street" You got a lot of nerve
Steve
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thesongcabinet
Joined: Tue Jun 02, 2009 7:19 pm Posts: 2035 Location: Denmark
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 Re: Your Best First lines
One of my favourite openings is from BB Winans' "Stand":
Tell me, what do you do When you've done all you can And it seems like it's never enough Tell me what do you say When your friends turn away And you're alone, so alone Tell me, what do you give When you've given your all and it Seems like you can't make it through
Well, you just stand
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Len911
Joined: Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:13 pm Posts: 1817 Location: Peculiar, MO
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 Re: Your Best First lines
"it's decidedly anglo-centric and dwells on depressing/outrageous songs" -Mojobone
Mojobone, you've brought up a very interesting point. It seems most commercial music wants upbeat, whilst the most memorable and "best??" lyrics are bluesy, honest, dark, sarcastic and truthful! I was going to choose Billie Holiday's "Strange Fruit", though I see someone already listed that one on the website. Since the depressing song was already chosen, I guess I'll go for upbeat and outrageous,lol! Billie Holiday's "Crazy He Calls Me"
"I say I'll move the mountains, and I'll move the mountains, if he wants them out of the way,"
But my real favorite line in the song is, "The difficult, I'll do right now, the impossible will take a little while."
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kevinmathie
Joined: Thu Aug 24, 2006 11:25 am Posts: 618 Location: Salt Lake City, Utah
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 Re: Your Best First lines
I like Five For Fighting's opening lines for "World:" "Got a package full of wishes, A time machine, a magic wand, A globe made out of gold..." And, I have to admit there's also something that really appeals to me about the opening lines of Cee Lo Green's recent hit (not the radio-friendly version): "I see you driving 'round town With the girl I love, and I'm like, F**k you! Oo, oo, oo" 
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mojobone
Joined: Sat May 17, 2008 4:20 pm Posts: 8731 Location: deepest Indiana, where the tall corn grows
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I do love the realistic dialogue; some writers, like Elmore Leonard have a keen ear for that. The usage is important to get right, too; if you're a certain age, that's exactly how you'd phrase it, "I seen you with her, and I'm like....whatever! ", etc.
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ernstinen
Joined: Mon Feb 02, 2004 6:59 pm Posts: 5282 Location: Los Angeles
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 Re: Your Best First lines
Casey H wrote: Wow, I'm old... I only recognized 2-3 of them. Warren Zevon's "Chinese menu" line is definitely one of the all time best. I also love Zevon's: I went home with a waitress The way I always do How was I to know? She was with the Russians too Casey Man, I'm with you Casey --- That's one of the best opening lines in a song EVER! Ern 
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ernstinen
Joined: Mon Feb 02, 2004 6:59 pm Posts: 5282 Location: Los Angeles
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My own favorite opening lines of mine: Spring came upon us slowly, tried to melt that sheet of white Then another blizzard hit us, blowing way into the night And our crops were surely frozen, and our people feared the worst 'Cause I guess we'd been accustomed to the hunger and the thirst "Then The Rains Came" (c) 2011 L. John Ernst Ern 
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nick.moxsom
Joined: Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:24 pm Posts: 727
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I am not in love, but I'm open to persuasion.
Joan Armatrading
Damn, that's a fine line.
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