Thanks so much for the comments and detailed critique of the song I submitted, "So Far So Good". Will definitely work on vocal personality and melody more. Super helpful comments!
-Bob
http://www.taxi.com/bobpaternoFor listing: S111222IP
HIGH-ENERGY, CONTEMPORARY, SUPER-CATCHY, POSITIVE INDIE POP SONGS with
VOCALS Two Door Cinema Club, The Naked and the Famous, and Foster the
People wanted by Film/TV Publisher servicing advertising. Arrangements
can be simple or complex, organic or synth-based so long as they are
inventive and show flair and imagination. Remember, the '80s was two
decades ago, so keep retro influences nuanced, if any. Lyrics should
be upbeat and motivating. It's advertising, so keep your lyrics
intriguing but not too specific. Most importantly, your hook should be
undeniably infectious and supported by distinctive vocals with plenty
of personality and finesse. This is a broad listing but potent
melodies that register immediately and impart a feel-good energy will
nail it. FULL SONGS ONLY. No expletives please. You must own 100% of
your master and composition. Broadcast quality only (good home
recordings will be considered). Please submit one to three songs
online or per CD, include lyrics. All submissions will be screened and
critiqued by the Publisher and must be received no later than
Thursday, December 22, 2011.
TAXI # S111222IP
