idk, the bridge thing is bothering me... I think I need an extra bar first or something...

and the balloon thing is bothering me to Casey...

Maybe: One day by chance we are both eye to eye
you start to smile but then I realize (the lie)
The smile I see, its not for me...

less cheesy, more direct... I gotta keep working in


I'll check v2 and make sure its the same number of words, or close as v1 Thanks!

another question:

Should it be Am I Invisible or I Am Invisible??

I was going to do the last chorus as I Am Invisible....

What about starting the last chorus with "Am I invisible" as the other choruses do but ending it with "I am invisible" as the last line, sung with different emotion and expression.

You also have room to sing it twice at the end... Once "Am I invisible" and then "I am invisible" as the ending.

Casey

Yeah I thought about that too. I thought about dropping the last "for your love" and end with: "and I'd give up all that I've got..... but I am Invisible..." thx!! I am thinking that would prob work best....

New lyrics and link posted at beginning of thread. and these questions

What do you think about the PC lyrics... and the new bridge lyrics? I wanted to be more conversational since I had so much imagery in the verses. I highlighted a few areas of question.. Thanks!!