1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM

[BrentWhiten]

Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn


Returned:
https://s.disco.ac/zkttxxoykfdw

Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.

I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.

[Casey H]

Congrats! I knew that EDM one was a winner!

[BradleyHagen]

Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn


Returned:
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Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.

I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.

Great Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work man

[BrentWhiten]

Congrats! I knew that EDM one was a winner!

Thanks Casey!!

[BrentWhiten]

Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn


Returned:
https://s.disco.ac/zkttxxoykfdw

Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.

I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.

Great Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work man

Thank you Bradley!! Enjoyed your Rockin' version as well!