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**--> 3rd song "Morning Light" - ok for this listing ?...

Post by pascaloubien » Sun May 27, 2012 7:51 am

Aa-Uu and hi all !

Please any feedback if this song "Morning Light" could fit for the listing below

http://soundcloud.com/pascal-lopez/morning-light

Thank you !!

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Post by cardell » Sun May 27, 2012 5:24 pm

This is such a feel good track!! I could listen over and over. :)

Simon is so groovy on bass...it's almost not right! :lol:

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Post by crazyhooks » Sun May 27, 2012 7:58 pm

Hey Pascal,
I'm listening on my phone, so its small but
Coming across with taste and it's a great fit
My opinion would be get to that verse quicker
After the hook , as it's s feel good vibe.
Great work .
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Post by andygabrys » Sun May 27, 2012 8:53 pm

I think this is WORKING and its a smooth groove. I'd go for it.

I also think J. crazyhooks is on about the song beginning - I would try and tighten that up to get to the meat more quickly.

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Post by pascaloubien » Tue May 29, 2012 12:21 pm

Hey ! thank you all for nice comments.

Thanks too for good advices here, I'll look what I can do, good idea !

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Post by kclements » Tue May 29, 2012 12:52 pm

Really great piece. Love the vibe/groove.

I agree with the others, I would cut the "intro" after the first vocal intro by half and get to the verse sooner.

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Post by pascaloubien » Tue May 29, 2012 3:12 pm

Aa-Uu !!

new version with shorter intro done.

http://soundcloud.com/pascal-lopez/morn ... ascal-2012

hope is better now !

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Post by cardell » Tue May 29, 2012 3:14 pm

kclements wrote:I agree with the others, I would cut the "intro" after the first vocal intro by half and get to the verse sooner.
Now that other have pointed that out: I can hear that for myself too.

BTW Pascal, Yes I believe that you should submit this track for the listing. ;)

Edit: we just posted at the same time. :oops: ...I'll go and check out the new version...

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Post by pedrocosta » Tue May 29, 2012 5:27 pm

Yes this is great! go for it :)
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Re: **--> 3rd song "Morning Light" - ok for this listing ?...

Post by pascaloubien » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:16 am

Kool thank you...

few changes here--> http://soundcloud.com/pascal-lopez/morn ... ascal-2012
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