A listen and a look at these lyrics please?
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Re: A listen and a look at these lyrics please?
Great Tune JP!
Just switch the verses from 1-2-3 to 2-3-1 and it all makes for a better landing
Cheers
Just switch the verses from 1-2-3 to 2-3-1 and it all makes for a better landing
Cheers
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Re: A listen and a look at these lyrics please?
+1cassmcentee wrote: ↑Fri Oct 02, 2020 11:43 amGreat Tune JP!
Just switch the verses from 1-2-3 to 2-3-1 and it all makes for a better landing
Cheers
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Hey thanks Cass.cassmcentee wrote: ↑Fri Oct 02, 2020 11:43 amGreat Tune JP!
Just switch the verses from 1-2-3 to 2-3-1 and it all makes for a better landing
Cheers
So let me see if I’m following. You’re saying start with v2, then C, then “3”. Are you calling the bridge “3”? And then end with the current V1?
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Sorry JP, I didn't listen all the way through the first time...
I listened to the first verse and chorus while following the lyrics, then stopped and read the rest of the lyrics.
I assumed there was a third verse from the lyrics.
So I was agreeing with "Review 1" re: you started from home
Verse 2 seems to have the better story connection as to what you would feel coming home
Bridge one seems to follow that up nicely lyrically
Verse 1 lyrics make for a great "Wrap-Up" for coming home/ every reason to stay
I listened to the first verse and chorus while following the lyrics, then stopped and read the rest of the lyrics.
I assumed there was a third verse from the lyrics.
So I was agreeing with "Review 1" re: you started from home
Verse 2 seems to have the better story connection as to what you would feel coming home
Bridge one seems to follow that up nicely lyrically
Verse 1 lyrics make for a great "Wrap-Up" for coming home/ every reason to stay
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Thanks Cass!
I just added a link to V1 and V2 swapped.
https://soundcloud.com/jp-pearson-1/com ... 95LhbQsaXO
I'll have to live with it a minute to see what I think.. But I get what you're saying. And thanks for listening and the critiques!
I just added a link to V1 and V2 swapped.
https://soundcloud.com/jp-pearson-1/com ... 95LhbQsaXO
I'll have to live with it a minute to see what I think.. But I get what you're saying. And thanks for listening and the critiques!
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