A Summer Place-Demo

[ronnie35]

Dude nice job

Ron

[BillK]

Thanks Ron for looking in and your comments

[BillK]

I had it done at a demo studio Jason

[funsongs]

As a George Strait fan, my 'a la' for this song would be his "Cross My Heart", which was in the movie "Pure Country" - very similar vibe & tonality & sentiment.
As an Old-School Country fan - I was Jonesin' for some pedal steel & fiddle (to replace the synthy-strings) - and probably a live drummer.

BUT - I see you listed this as a DEMO - so what you've got is fine - and proves the point that it's the song/story/lyric that need to be the star - and you delivered that.

I agree with the suggestion to reconsider the title - and possibly repeat/strengthen the Chorus elements - IF you were pushing for radio play.
As an Old-Guy - songs that go more than 3 minutes (and I've got a few longer songs)... well, they just sorta fall out of the radio thing.
Great vocal performance really helps 'sell' this song, too.

2 thumbs up - and it would be cool to see someone pick this up and have fun with it.
Hope that helps.

[BillK]

Thanks funsongs for looking in and commenting

[DanLuedke]

Well done, Bill! Great vocals and evocative lyrics.

[LamarPecorino]

Bill, it was a real treat to listen to "A Summer Place". Thanks for sharing! Best of luck with it.

[BillK]

Thanks Dan Luedke and Lamar-Pecorino for looking in and the kind comments

[BillK]

I had this done at a Nashville demo studio