Alt-Pop Rock Cue for $50k+ NO BIG DEAL

[DeeperProductions]

I am new here. My name is Sam Choate. This is my unfinished effort for the recent posting for contemporary alt-pop rock cues. I really liked the reference track. I'm a bit stuck here and time is ticking. I don't know if I'll finish in time to submit, but I'm trying anyways. I really love doing this! It's a lot of work but I believe I can be successful from it.

https://soundcloud.com/samchoate/alt-po ... ue/s-TIRFI

It's only about 30 seconds long. Where should it go from here? I haven't written many cues. Thank you in advance and I'll return the favor to any of you awesome commenters.

[gregorym]

Sounding good. A great start.

NOTE: the flat line face is supposed to be the ending repeat symbol. It didn't workout, emoji took over. he he he

You have a awesome riff to start. Then you go something like |: D | F | G | D with little to no melody, which is cool.

The Dorian progression that is in the reference might go well with the intro riff. For you |: Dmi | Dmi | G | G

Maybe a B section: |: D | F | C | G

These are just my initial thoughts. Awesome work so far, keep it up.

[DeeperProductions]

Thank you so much for taking the time to do that, Greg. What are you working on currently? I'd be happy to check it out and return the favor.

[gregorym]

Surething. I do have two things I'm working on at the moment. I could use a critique on my metapop score. I'll pm you in a day or two.

Later,
Greg