Amapiano vibes were off!

[Musicmonk84]

I'm happy with the track I submitted, but I can see where I faltered. Here's the feedback:

What I like most about this song
Jon,
Love the foundation you got going on.

I think you could improve this song by
I would go back and check the references. Amapiano has a very particular and unique sound that was actually created just a few years ago so most producers are going to have to create this from scratch or modify pre existing work.
Just needs a drop to the log drum bass line.

I returned or forwarded this song because
I'm returning this because it's not really on the amapiano vibes.
This is more like house/lounge music right now.

I can definitely see a little more clearly that my approach to the song was a little more house than the style presented. I definitely gave it some Amapiano vibes, but it was too aggressive overall. I'm honestly not sure what "needs a drop to the log drum bass line" actually means. Maybe they were referring to the log bass needing less of downbeat? I can definitely see how I needed to play more on the off beat with my log drum.

Here's the track: https://youtu.be/d0aB2aiO-4A

[BrianCullen]

The track sounds great! And now I am going to find out what ampiano sounds like

All the best,
Brian