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The song doesn't have a chorus/hook. That's a basic requirement of songwriting. Repeating "I'll be missing you" over and over is not that. You need to take step 1 and study the essentials of songwriting, forgetting for now your thoughts of getting a song to an artist. I didn't bother checking out the lyrics because so much work is needed on everything. It's light years away from what it would take to be appealing to anyone.Just a penny for your thoughts if this song would suit an artist like Lewis Capaldi
if not what would I need to do with this track to make it appealing to him?
He writes his own songs so barking up the wrong tree there. But genreally this is just really badly done ...not sure if trolling?XrashGates wrote: ↑Sun Apr 21, 2024 6:47 amJust a penny for your thoughts if this song would suit an artist like Lewis Capaldi
Delete it.XrashGates wrote: ↑Sun Apr 21, 2024 6:47 amif not what would I need to do with this track to make it appealing to him?
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