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Beautiful Garden

Post by sjtelford » Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:56 am

Beautiful GardenThe beautiful garden that we both want to growCan never be as real as dreams of New York snow.No seed that we may plant will ever show a weedBut something might just blossomWhen pebbles learn to bleed.The beautiful garden that grows the world around,Will forever be a dream, in Bermuda found.On fertile land our rose won't grow, no thorn to draw our bloodBut something might just happenWhen dry rivers start to flood.This beautiful garden I christen 'Heaven Lost',Though it may not have flowers,And it may not have streams,This beautiful gardenIs where we plant our dreams.Shane Joseph Telford Copyright ©2007 Shane Joseph Telford

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Re: Beautiful Garden

Post by zolo » Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:52 pm

I like it, Shane

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Re: Beautiful Garden

Post by zolo » Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:59 am

Could I try to make music for this lyrics, please?

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Re: Beautiful Garden

Post by sjtelford » Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:13 am

Quote:Could I try to make music for this lyrics, please?why not

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Re: Beautiful Garden

Post by zolo » Fri Oct 12, 2007 12:27 am

OK, Shane I will work on this lyrics, when I have my voice back. Recently I´m experiencing terrible problems with it, having due to exhaustion my voice 6 to 7 tones down. The problem last already one month and I´m getting depresed not being able to work on songs.Regards, Sasha

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