Casey H wrote: ↑Tue Mar 29, 2022 11:19 am
Hey Dave
I don't think this is going to get the nod here as the lead guitar just doesn't have that blues soul spirit. Also, middle part with the keyboard solo might be too "happy" and get away from the blues. But a lot could be done with this by working on it more on your own or with a collaborator.
Best of luck!
Casey
Hi Casey,
Looks like you were right.
Here is the critique, to me it's saying there is no emotion or mood connected to the track:
What I like most about this song
Your instrumental is developed with an engaging Blues sound. You did a great job keeping the arrangement interesting and catchy.
I think you could improve this song by
Your instrumental is well composed, but it doesn't showcase an interesting tone, vibe, or emotion that could set the intent for any of the scenes. Establishing emotions that could set or change the scene is key.
I returned or forwarded this song because
Your instrumental didn't come close enough to a mood or vibe that was right for the listing.
Additional things I noticed...
Style
Mood is off target with the listing request
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