DRUMLINE INSTRUMENTALS (in a wide stylistic range)

[WSAO]

Hi guys, any feedback if this drumline song is according to the request would be appreciated.

Listing:
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S240324RD

Song:
https://www.taxi.com/members/WJQg0yIBTr ... --drumline

Thanks

[Telefunkin]

I think its a great submission and it sounds like a forward to me .

[mteezykeys]

Strong Submission! Great sound choices and nice developmental arc.

[WSAO]

Thanks guys,
Drums is my main instrument so I hope they like it.
Cheers!

[WSAO]

Nah..
It's a return...

What I like most about this song
The drum line sound are working here.

I think you could improve this song by
The issue how overshadowed by other sounds that don't make much sense in this style, like piano.

I returned or forwarded this song because
Super simpler approaches, like the first and 4th references are the strongest approach to this style where the brief tells us that drum line sounds need to dominate the track.