Feedback and collaboration on pop rock song

[seanmorrow]

Hi all,
Here's a song I've been working on as I get to know the finer points of music production. Like all my songs, this is still a very rough demo since I still have a lot to learn, so I'd appreciate in any feedback. I'd also be interested in collaborating with people for engineering, mixing, and mastering this song, so let me know if you want to team up.

https://soundcloud.com/sean-morrow-6592 ... final-demo

[deantaylor]

Cool song! Good potential.

I didn't catch the name Bianca used in the song. Is it?
- If not, I'd retitle the song to be more reflective of the theme/emotion of the song.
- If so, I'd consider removing the name, because proper names in songs is not good for film/tv.

I suggest always posting the written lyrics on SoundCloud with the song. It's easy. Just copy/paste the lyrics into the description area. Especially important on songs that are full of words, like this one.