Hi.
I'd like to know what you guys think of this piece:
It's all very standard midi. Production would need to be upgraded before any pitching of course. so I'm also open to any collabs.
Paul
Feedback on classical cello/viola instrumental please
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Re: Feedback on classical cello/viola instrumental please
It is a quite dark and unsettling piece. On the surface, when it starts it seems like it is going to be a very gentle and easy listening track; but then you start to make all kinds of weird key changes, both in the progression and in the melody. For example, at 0:10, 0:20, 0:44, and more after that. I suspect that these fall into place when you listen to it several times (in fact I did, and they do), but the problem with sync is that they should make sense the FIRST time... and as it is, I think they catch the listener by surprise too much. They would better fit an own/artistic track than one for sync (the best listening music, for me personally, is the stuff that gets better when you listen to it more often; and this sure is a candidate for that).
You already know that the production needs to improve as well. The problems with these things is, that there's a LOT more effort in the production than there is on the composition itself.
Also, the usual listings for this kind of instrumental ask for 90-120 seconds; the piece as it is is much too long for "normal" sync listings.
You already know that the production needs to improve as well. The problems with these things is, that there's a LOT more effort in the production than there is on the composition itself.
Also, the usual listings for this kind of instrumental ask for 90-120 seconds; the piece as it is is much too long for "normal" sync listings.
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