Feedback please, Blues Instrumental

[DBarnett]

Thanks for your opinions/suggestions here
I haven't been able to get a FW in a while so any help would be appreciated
Here is the listing link:
https://www.taxi.com/listings/favorite# ... er%20Media.

Here's my tune "Feel Good Blues"
https://www.taxi.com/members/GJH3rS9kRt ... good-blues
Thanks for the listen

[DouglasKnight]

Hey man! Some really nice tones and playing on this one! To me the lead and rhythm guitar playing is close, but still a bit loose for a final version. I'd suggest replaying the guitars as tight as possible and you're there. Hope that helps?

[DBarnett]

Hey man! Some really nice tones and playing on this one! To me the lead and rhythm guitar playing is close, but still a bit loose for a final version. I'd suggest replaying the guitars as tight as possible and you're there. Hope that helps?

Thanks, Doug
I'll see if I can tighten it up a bit

[gitanosoy]

Hi Dave,

Ye, I agree with Doug, the band swings but the lead doesn't, a little stiff and loose in some parts and more after the break.

Good luck.

[DBarnett]

Hi Dave,

Ye, I agree with Doug, the band swings but the lead doesn't, a little stiff and loose in some parts and more after the break.

Good luck.

Good feedback, Andre
It helps when two people are saying the same thing
Thanks, my friend

[DBarnett]

Howdy!
I have updated the link or it's here for your convivence
https://www.taxi.com/members/GJH3rS9kRt ... good-blues
I know I still have some work to do so please let me know if I'm making progress and what needs tweaked
Thanks!

[gitanosoy]

Hi Dave,

Right from the start the rhythm guitar is off now, it was in the first post.

[DBarnett]

Hi Dave,

Right from the start the rhythm guitar is off now, it was in the first post.

I'm at a loss, I don't know what I'm doing wrong

[DBarnett]

I updated it again
Is this just the wrong approach with the rhythm guitar?

[lesmac]

Hi Dave,

Sounds like the second stab on the rhythm is coming in early.

Maybe move it on the grid till it sounds right or replay and use a late upstroke for that one.


Get ur groove on man.