Forward for Ambient Drone S200723AD

[TimHarrison]

Got a forward for this and 2 returns.( I'm going to make the suggested changes to the return)

My forward was “Unsteady Approach"
My returns were, "First Sighting" and "More Sightings" though these are 2 versions of the same track


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[jwamusic]

Hey Tim, I just listened to your forward and your return. I liked 'em both! What did the sceener suggest for changes in First Sighting?

I had one forward and one return from the same listing. Here are my links:

https://soundcloud.com/user-688794987/low-flying-drone
https://soundcloud.com/user-688794987/game-of-drones

-John

[ComposerLDG]

Congratulations on the forward, Tim!

[funsongs]

Congrats - engaging title & track - reckon it'll find a good home & placements.
Cheers,
Peter

[TimHarrison]

Hey Tim, I just listened to your forward and your return. I liked 'em both! What did the sceener suggest for changes in First Sighting?

-John

The screeners comment was that the layered sounds were too upfront and should be pulled back/more subtle. Also that it could be more subtle overall at the start
I look forward to listening to your tracks later when I get a chance

[TimHarrison]

Congratulations on the forward, Tim!

Thanks!

[TimHarrison]

Congrats - engaging title & track - reckon it'll find a good home & placements.
Cheers,
Peter

Thanks Peter. I hope so

[TimHarrison]

I had one forward and one return from the same listing. Here are my links:

https://soundcloud.com/user-688794987/low-flying-drone
https://soundcloud.com/user-688794987/game-of-drones

-John

Hi John, I listened to your drones and I enjoyed both of them. Which one was the return? I noticed key changes in Game of Drones (excellent title by the way) so I'm assuming that was the one that they returned ; just trying to play the role of screener lol

[jwamusic]

Yes, you are correct. Game of Drones was returned, although the screener did not mention the key changes as being a factor.