Freash ears and perspective Please

[Uttenreither]

Hi All,

I was hoping for some freash ears and perspective on what ever strikes you about this track.

Would this work for film/TV?
Mix?

https://soundcloud.com/uttenreither/time-left-behind

Thank you,
John

[SteveC]

Hi John,

check your link, not working

cheers

st

[Uttenreither]

Thanks Steve,

I think it will work now.

[deantaylor]

Link works now.
I'm out of my league on instrumentals in this genre but I think it can work for film-tv.
Personally I'd like to hear a little more variation throughout the track.

[Uttenreither]

Thank you Dean Taylor.

It's funny, I thought the track was fine compositionally until you suggested variation. Now I hear what you mean. Thank you for your help!