A little late to this but....
I really liked it.... I GUESS the Chorus lyrics are a bit repetitive like Mark said, and perhaps lack melody? But hey man...it's punk rock right?? From my own experience submitting stuff in this genre, it is extremely difficult to gauge what they are looking for... If it's too "clean" or "melodic" ? it isn't "punk enough" if it is too "raw" "the production isn't there"...Not to throw shade on the screeners, but this is a tough one to be sure. Personally though, I enjoyed the track!
Help me!
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Re: Help me!
Sure mate, the fine line between Pop and Punk make things difficult for us!BradleyHagen wrote: ↑Fri Apr 12, 2024 5:01 pmA little late to this but....
I really liked it.... I GUESS the Chorus lyrics are a bit repetitive like Mark said, and perhaps lack melody? But hey man...it's punk rock right?? From my own experience submitting stuff in this genre, it is extremely difficult to gauge what they are looking for... If it's too "clean" or "melodic" ? it isn't "punk enough" if it is too "raw" "the production isn't there"...Not to throw shade on the screeners, but this is a tough one to be sure. Personally though, I enjoyed the track!
Anyway, I'm working on a different lyrics and melody for the chorus.
Thanks!
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Original rock song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwMfPcPtTpQ
Cover:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNsIgYBqfXc
Instrumental:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RR4PbgEy46k
Cinema:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzGNxH2VGdw
Original rock song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwMfPcPtTpQ
Cover:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNsIgYBqfXc
Instrumental:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RR4PbgEy46k
Cinema:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzGNxH2VGdw
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Re: Help me!
That's cool! I REALLY need to take a week or two and do the same with some of my tracks that were close, but didn't make the cut in order to be ready for the next one!WSAO wrote: ↑Wed Apr 17, 2024 3:12 amSure mate, the fine line between Pop and Punk make things difficult for us!BradleyHagen wrote: ↑Fri Apr 12, 2024 5:01 pmA little late to this but....
I really liked it.... I GUESS the Chorus lyrics are a bit repetitive like Mark said, and perhaps lack melody? But hey man...it's punk rock right?? From my own experience submitting stuff in this genre, it is extremely difficult to gauge what they are looking for... If it's too "clean" or "melodic" ? it isn't "punk enough" if it is too "raw" "the production isn't there"...Not to throw shade on the screeners, but this is a tough one to be sure. Personally though, I enjoyed the track!
Anyway, I'm working on a different lyrics and melody for the chorus.
Thanks!
I hear ya on the pop/punk/power punk/power pop lines...they are VERY blurry!
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