hi everybody i'm a forum newbee. ( let me introduce myself )

[Skatzsinger]

Hi Jim, I'm a Newbie too, good to meet you.

I couldn't find the song you mentioned, only She's So Wild, which has a great groove, very edgy, kinda Led Zeppelin drum thing going on. A little bit too long I think, and I was wanting it to go wilder after the build up about three quarters of the way through. Oh, and 'wild, wild child' is a Billy Idol line so it might be a good idea to find an alternative.

There ya go. Hope that helps, you can take it or leave it, I have no proven track record so who am I to judge?!

Good luck with it.

[Billovinmusic]

Hello Jim
From one newbie to another this is a great group. I finally went out of my box at the last Road Rally
and connected with some very talented and caring people. I can see that working within the community can give you additional tools to further a career or at least get us on track with what it takes to get forwards! I wish you the best

[JamesCarvalho]

thanks for the warm welcome and the feedbck.
i have deleted the last song put up another one.

if want to critique you can go on my newer posting

[ronnie35]

hello Jim
Ron

[mobster85]

Hi Jim and welcome to the forum. You will find the people in here to be extremely helpful and encouraging and also will give you honest opinions. Good luck.

Peace,
Bob LoGrasso

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