I found a poem i wrote 32 years ago...new acoustic song

[feaker66]

Wondering if the sparseness of the acoustic tracks are too minimal?

https://soundcloud.com/feaker66/going-away


Going away


You have been the light in my life..the deepest love in my heart
I knew you were special from the start.
I’ve been dreading this day..we’d.. have… to..part… you’re

going….away…..…so very far… away…..yur
Going away…..I know I can’t ask you to stay
I’m gonna miss you girl ..I’m gonna miss you girl

You’re finally out there on your own..mistakes you’re gonna have to own
Don’t feel bad if you don’t phone home
cuz that just tells me…… you’re.. not..feeling …alone….you’re

going….away…..…so very far… away…..yur
Going away…..I know I can’t ask you to stay
I’m gonna miss you girl …oh..I’m gonna miss you girl my little girl