I would like specifics

[stylayly]

This song was returned and one of the points the screener mentioned is needing "modern production flourishes". While this seems great advice, it's too general of a statement to be helpful. Any ideas?

https://www.dropbox.com/s/azhifkd07avez ... f.mp3?dl=0

Thank you
Clay Bearden

[Telefunkin]

Hi, one isolated comment might be difficult to interpret, but piecing together all the feedback is often more revealing. You might get more ideas back if you post it all. From a quick listen I like your piece but hear a bright and stiff sounding piano that's upfront so its not in the same sonic space as the subdued orchestral components. Perhaps there's a clue there, that bringing those elements together within the production would present a more useful cue. Just my thoughts though, so see what others say.

[cassmcentee]

Nice piece although I could only listen to 30 seconds of it
The piano is way too Midi sounding and so far Left that it is distracting