What I like most about this song:
Piano sounds great and is well performed. Nice job setting an ominous tone.
I think you could improve this song by:
I think adding a bit more instrumentation such as more orchestral and Christmas-y accent sounds could help the main melody and arrangement sound a bit more engaging.
I returned or forwarded this song because:
I returned this song because it needs further development.
The additional reasons listed are " Melody could be stronger" and "Could have a better developmental "arc" ." Hmmm. What do you think? I'm going to release it myself. Maybe I'll take the screener up on adding some orchestral background and maybe a tubular bell here and there.
I think I need to remember what Michael & others have said about taking all THREE of the references and melding their ideas into the guideline. I will do that in future submissions!
Happy New Year!Cheers!
Merry