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[irwin]

Sorry Irwin, I didn't intend to offend you!

Oh no please, I am not offend at all.

[irwin]

I know you all are trying to help me I respect this and don't need to waste  any more of your time. So this is what I understand you guys are telling me not to be original with my own chord ideas creation. You want me to copy what other songwriters/musicians used in their songs before, well, that is very easy for me to do. I can do that. (follow) no problem.

This is a link to my new song. Please tell me does it have the same issues?  

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-ul4QKHnEg

[cosmicdolphin]

This is a link to my new song. Please tell me does it have the same issues?  

Yes pretty much.

I think I've said all I can over the years Irwin, my final advice is to go find a local music teacher and get some lessons and I will only ever comment again on your songs if I can hear a real improvement.

Mark

[Telefunkin]

So this is what I understand you guys are telling me not to be original with my own chord ideas creation. You want me to copy what other songwriters/musicians used in their songs before, well, that is very easy for me to do. I can do that. (follow) no problem.

I believe the suggestion was to copy something as an experiment to check whether you had the 'musical 'ear' to do so. It was not a suggestion to stop being original in the rest of your compositions. Did you try it?

This is a link to my new song. Please tell me does it have the same issues?  
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-ul4QKHnEg

Yes, it has some of the same issues. The vocals are not in tune with the track, some of the chords are unusual, and the incidental sounds are not in tune with the chords. The fact that you ask if it has the same the issues suggest that you can't tell, and that's why the experiment to copy a short section of another track would be worthwhile.