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Lullaby With New Bridge

Post by Patrick » Wed Oct 13, 2021 9:44 am

It's titled 'Go to sleep'.

My guitar is a bit sketchy, and the vocals are a little juiced, but I'd still like your opinions on this track.

I was inspired to write this lullaby when my daughters were born.

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Re: Lullaby With New Bridge

Post by Patrick » Mon Oct 18, 2021 11:18 am

Well this is a real 'hoot' for sure!

I sent my Lullaby to an outfit based out of Nashville called SongwritersMusicGroup.

This was their critique of my tune...

"We think your song has “Hit” song potential and we feel a lot of people
will be able to relate to this song if properly presented. You should
not “pitch” your recording to music industry professionals. It is too
slow, needs a music break and the chorus repeated. Your recording also
sounds dated, like something from the 1960's."


But then they go on to offer me a recording contract if I send them $795.00, to cover the cost of professionals redoing my recording.

What do all of you think? Thoughts?
Bad art can make you laugh
Good art can make you think
Great art can destroy you

- Me

(Did he just quote himself?? Yes! Yes I did!)

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