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Hello everyone , Ive only just joined and finding my way , can you help please , trust me on this I have a good hook , I definitely need a melody for the verse and possibly a melody for the bridge it depends if its better than the one I have , its called " Slipping away " and its about moving on in a positive way , if you can get a lyric great but the melody is more important ,Thanks for now , best wishes.
Need a verse melody .
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Need a verse melody .
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Re: Need a verse melody and maybe a bridge .
Hello Frank (at least, that's the name on your Soundcloud page).fbd wrote: ↑Tue Jul 26, 2022 11:25 amhttps://soundcloud.com/user-963282439/s ... al_sharing
Hello everyone , Ive only just joined and finding my way , can you help please , trust me on this I have a good hook , I definitely need a melody for the verse and possibly a melody for the bridge it depends if its better than the one I have , its called " Slipping away " and its about moving on in a positive way , if you can get a lyric great but the melody is more important ,Thanks for now , best wishes.
To these ears, the track is very reminiscent of Motown. Is that the vintage & R&B genre you are aiming at?
It would be good to know what YOUR goal/target is - then complete the writing in that vein.
Hope that helps.
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This is closed now thanks , poor response .
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Re: Need a verse melody .
To be honest - seems your description, guidelines, and goals more-clearly defined may have resulted in a better response.
For what it's worth. Better luck next time.
Cheers.
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Re: Need a verse melody .
Yes quite , Its new to me , Ill get better at describing these things . I have had one response since my last post and they are having a closer look at it , what I should have done was let you hear what I like and left blank what I dont . I may try again , Ive got lots of unfinished stuff lying round . Cheers .
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