Need clarification on return feedback, and thanks for the forwards!

[myk247365]

Hi screener 457,

I was confused by your feedback for "Just Around the Corner" for listing S231001HR. You wrote "The dynamics in the deleiver is a bit low at times as well." Did you mean "delivery"?

Also, you wrote "Great us of central motif. There were some instances that the woodwinds seem off beat and need to be adjusted to make sure they are landing correctly in time. (when woodwinds first introduced at the top) " Did you mean the downbeat of the motif? or somewhere else in the melody? There are a few places throughout the piece where things are deliberately off the beat to offer the music supervisor and editor opportunities to cut a scene in a way that keeps the audience off-balance. I would hope this sort of thing would be appreciated as creative rather than considered a problem.

I understand there's limited space for feedback, but I hope you would offer just a little more detail here so I can make effective changes to the piece.

And thank you for the forwards on S230927CN!! The music library accepted them!

[CTWF]

I understand there's limited space for feedback, but I hope you would offer just a little more detail here so I can make effective changes to the piece.

In 5.5 years I have not seen a single screener engaging in the forum. Not happening - for good reasons.

Tom

[myk247365]

ok, thanks, I thought I had seen other requests. no worries then.

[CTWF]

ok, thanks, I thought I had seen other requests. no worries then.

Yeah, I think people like to "talk" to the screeners on here, but it is like talking to a wall.

[Paulie]

Without hearing your track, it sounds like the screener is telling you that your musical time needs improvement. It's not about creating an edit point, it's about playing with good musical time.

[myk247365]

Here's the track:

https://www.taxi.com/members/uwEIk6EPRS ... the-corner