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Post by ronnie35 » Sun Jun 05, 2022 12:39 pm

HI This is for TAXI # S220614TA meditation My piece is called YOUR QUIET TIME AT www.soundcloud.com/777rd THANK YOU

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Post by DouglasKnight » Sun Jun 05, 2022 2:16 pm

Hey Ron! I like the piece very much, however I noticed that the mix is right-heavy and doesn't sound balanced in the center. Not sure if that was intentional? Also, the breathy patch isn't as pleasing to me, sonically - it sounds like white noise and is sort of unsettling for a meditation piece. Just my two cents, so hope it's helpful.

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Post by ronnie35 » Sun Jun 05, 2022 3:38 pm

Thanks Doug That is what came to me also
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