New song

[walter327]

Hi, folks.I have a new song, " In America", over in garageband.com and would really appreciate it if folks would give it a listen and reply. It is a live recording for a radio show, so I had to cut out the applause. Otherwise, it's not a bad recording.http://www.garageband.com/artist/walterwcomerThanks.

[jeffe]

Very patriotic.I'm not an American myself so I can probably be more objective. I thought the composition was not that spectacular, but then you may have a lot more planned with a studio version. It's hard to tell with just the acoustic guitar. It flowed well enough though. The thing I liked most about it was the lyrics. You use some clever and powerful combinations of words. I'm sure, to stir up the patriotism even further.I'm not sure if you want comments on the quality of the song itself. Or what the song is about?Either way, it should go down well with fellow americans.